Dope brawl

Lit verse from both mcS

J, I didnt feel likr you didnt hsve any hard punches. You fired some jabs, but alot of your verse felt like filler to me, you had a sick flow though I cant lie lol, Villian, I really dont like the wording on your opener. "NOT BETTER W CHOICE HITs".. idk man.. the rest of your verse was solid. You had good concepts with decent enough execution... overall, Im going to give this to Villian for harder punches and the more enjoyavle read.. fairs in guys!

Ight brew. Nice flow here and great delivery. Im feeling the aggression. Nice rhymes for the most part but there was one that was broken (ropes shackles n chains is 5 syllables where smoke and cracklin flames is 6)..also u rhymed weak wit week which is a big no no.. Dont rhyme the same word twice. Ur biggest problem tho is a lack of complexity. U dont really bring wordplay / nameflips and therefore ur punchlines fall rather flat. Work on being more outside the box homie and ull be Gucci

Villlian, very nice rhyming here and on point flow. U hsd a couple nice little one liners here like the Kellerman and the closer which i liked a lot tho i felt it could been executed a lil better. U excelled here where the opponent fell behind as far as complexity goes... Nice stuff

Fairz in folks keep grindin.