Alright squad. First thing you're gonna wanna do in a battle is insult or attack your opponent. Anything about you being in the studio or your shawtys thing is just filler that isnt doing damage. Then you gotta set up punches and use some double entendre or wordplay or some other literary device to make the metaphor interesting and unexpected. Figure out how to craft some punchlines.

Eloh had a much more direct verse. Simple as that.

One went in.. other didn't. Fairs in fellas keep at it

Self explanatory here. Eloh, I'd say in general your rhymes are smooth and your flips are clever but in the text format against the better competition you definitely gotta bring longer multis. 4-7 syllables ideally while still maintaining that silky flow. 

Eloh took this on all levels. Fairs.

Eloh got this one easily. Did enough to take the win. Good scheme use and a good verse.

Loser wasn't directing his attacks that much and his punches lacked creativity. You should read some battles and see how peeps structure their shit.

Squad, this wasnt a battle verse at allyou failed to throw any punches, that being said it wasnt that bad of a read,though repetitive. Eloh, you were just doing your thing good punches all through and some good concepts... Overall, Eloh got this fairly easily with a battle verse. Fairs in!

Stackz got barz.