I think Shodan won this comfortably and here's why . Although this is a good notch below what he is capable of (tag tourney proves that) he still did a much better job here at coming with better ideas and writing them in a clever way that hits hard . The flashcard and the hit points meter lines were evidence of that . No need to reach with those and he didn't which was good to see from him . Erk you had some somewhat decent stuff but you had some ideas that were complete duds from the jump (did you really think that shit is hot/pooping in the desert was a good idea ? Lol nah man you gotta dead shit like that) . The Prince Vegeta line was ok and that was probably your best line which is not good for you considering the quality that Shodan came with in comparison . You really gotta stop with these corny ass lines like "lines of coke on stage" or "pooping in the desert" that are either played or just nonsensical . 

Expo: Vegeta is the prince of Saiyans and always talks about his "Saiyan Pride" but gets his ass kicked. Good luck my man!

Shodan's verse was dope. Only problem was that last multi scheme, with the FLARE bit. Apart from that the bars were creative and executed nicely, a lot more original and clear than Erk's.

Erk had some hits and misses. 1st bar didn't really land, the execution and wording didn't really add up so the punch landed but with less sting than expected. Desert bar was funny but the multis were forced. Closer was dope.

Overall I feel Shodan had a more clear and creative verse and shit was easy to understand while the punches were hard, whereas Erk's bars had potential to be solid af but didn't land hard due to lack of good execution.

Actually, not the FLARE, the ARMS bit... My bad

Show was cleaner a bit more in depth and cleverer with his bars. Erk had a good showing but the punches werent as heavy. Hot shit/poop in the desert, pretty tame stuff.