Eos got this with the better put together lines but they weren't without their flaws . If you're trying to refer to the box you put your verse in as a square and then refer to a treasure map as a square then you're doing it wrong my guy . Also you said you'll put what you 8/ate on the floor ? Nah that's a reach cause no one talks like that . If you put only 7 lines in would you say "I'll put what I 7 on the floor" ? Of course not cause that sounds retarded af and the same applies to the 8/ate line . Sogreat you had some decent stuff but your lines were way less put together in comparison to Saiyan's and you're selling yourself short because of it . You gotta have more in the rhyme department, imo, and your punches need to be a bit more creative from what you have . Cum/come lines don't work in 2018 my guy , and the space to fight line is pretty corny if you ask me . You have potential just try to build from here .

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I felt Eos just hit harder. Fairs.