Got Brayne winning this one . Erk you had either a really corny punchline or a really played one once every 2 lines and there was really no in between in your verse at all . A lot of Brayne / Brain nameplays have probably been done to death on this dude so just think a bit more outside the box with stuff like that and bars like "permanent constipation / never have the great shit" just aren't gonna cut it man those lines are incredibly corny . Brayne I felt you may have taken your opponent a bit light in some areas but I feel you had the punches of the battle with the Ponzi scheme and confused Mexicans lines being bonafide highlights . Some light spots here and there like "stand up comedian/punchline" which is super played, but all in all I feel you did a pretty decent job here .

wow

The Fire Nation

Only expo I need I thibk is B.D stands for "Big Dick"

simple choice, erk's wordplay n concepts seemd forcd n contrived in comparison

brayne brought sick as fuk concepts, sum rare laugh out loud punches n solid angles 2 reely break da brere down, could do wit tightenin da feed lines 4 my likin, erk less so

As far as im concerned erk is a talented g but dis was a bodybag, outclassed, no bias innit

gingeaaaaaaahhh

Got brayne taking this with a more clever use of metaphor that gave his punches more strength. My advice to erk is to think of how your setups could be flipped more creatively. You use special effects and then the punch is about a movie. Theres no misdirection, and when the punch is that predictable it loses major impact. Also if you need an expo for something you shouldnt use it. An expo is for something that people should get, but they may have missed it. A wordplay or something. B.D. s it sanding for big dick. Theres no way anyone would make that connection without an expo. 

Good battle fellahs