ill write and expo later

your necks took like a neck and then vyvansse is adhd durg which would keep you fronce bounces of the wall

Evol Ive seen a big improvement already in your multis and punch attempts.. however alot of your punches lack setup, and take away the sting entirely.. Nerd, What I didnt enjoy was alot of rhymes seemed like reaches too me.."Call" and "Fool" most noteably... I enjoyed your.verse though. You had alot of cool concepts and decent exectiion

Mvgt: Nerdism

Winner took this with a better structured verse overall.

Loser is improving, but you still need to fully capitalize your rhymes; don't half capitalize unlessyou need too. I did like your line about vyvanse, I still take it, but felt the setup wasn't properly executed. You started off alright, but drifted in the second half.

Fair's in, good luck. 

Really couldn't feel the flow of the loser, winner had better punches so gotta go with him

evol: decent deleivery, decent punchlines nothing really hit too hard, the ending bar could have been better seems as if you rushed the end. Always take time to fully prepare you're verse and commit to the drop

Nerdism: has the higher and stronger punch count, continued through with heavy bars, remained composed, more creativness