Ok so this was rather disappointing from one and sort of just meh from the other . Erk you made a lot of mistakes here that you didn't make in your Rant battle and that really hurt you here . Shodan doesn't sound the way you think it does based off how the multis looked in your verse so that didn't even rhyme and your punches ranged from mediocre to average af best . Even though you battle a lot just try to keep some level of consistency . Edge from what I've read of you this wasn't your best work but based on the mistakes that Erk made you did more than enough to win . The Easter Bunny Visit line is alright just the idea itself is kind of meh, imo . The Pittsburgh line is corny because it's new and everyone and their brother can see the punch coming from a mile away right now (happens all the time with mass-shooting bars) so it felt like a major copout . You and Seul both recently had limb punches so the effect of it isn't as prevalent as what it should've been cause it isn't as fresh . The Dexter's Lab punch is ok although there aren't multiple DeeDee's in his lab so it reads awkwardly . Either way Edge got this comfortably , but I'd rather see you two battle when you're at your best cause this doesn't seem to be it at all .

Expo-

Swords have edges lol.

Shodan are Japanese .. lol, Im sure Shodan carried swords.

Also Me and Brayne Ded lost against him and Shodan

In the tag**

It was hard to choose, but Erk had more punches, both were good though

Something super light for dude. Lemme know if y’all need Expo or anything. Tree of Life was the Pittsburgh Synagogue that got shot up.

.:EvilInK:.

Think this was pretty clear, got Edge taking this w/ better creativity, Erk had alot of played material, and some ideas that were bland, example: begging / cock obssesive whore. Edge was cleaner in execution, although i've seen some dd punches so that one didn't hit too hard for me, cause i knew it was coming. Fairs in fellas, & good-luck!

i'll will destroy any of you or

both