ELOH got this with more swag in his verse with punches that weren't affected due to iffy readability like Erk's were . Soliloquy line was the line of the battle on both sides so that sealed it . Erk you had the fresher ideas but your rhyming and the wording of some of your lines is really letting you down (talking about blatant fat yells out ? Why would fat yell out ?) And saying someone is a whack because you perceive their skills to be whack is a bit of a reach, too . This verse wasn't necessarily bad but it got sort of outclassed in comparison to cleaner writing and rhyming .

I got my winner taking this with the more complex verse from stronger Multies to harder jabs an punches throughout. Loser Started out nice with it but had a few lighter hits as the lines went on but the flow was nice pretty much start to finish. All in all punches beat flow so I got my winner here. Gb guys

Be back for this one

Eek had a lot more punches that landed here. Very consistent and not too many down points imo. Only thing I'd say is some concepts you used could've been expanded on More, but this was a solid drop.

Eloh you're verse was ok , some punches landed and others didn't. Setups could've been better. More misses than hits. You should work on being more consistent.

Close but I gotta winner, fair's in.