i dont' like cursing

if your that good 

you shouldn't have to curse

Sense--you wrote this like a topical piece, like some creative writing project. In battle rap you'd be better off with put down lines or wordplay, it'll get people more invested. I think your main thing, is that you need to watch those end Multis, cos some of them were a reach or didn't rhyme at all, and it takes away from everything that you're trying to say.

Godly- this was clearly penned up quickly. You clearly know how to write, but saw an easy win so did the minimum needed. Like the angle of not cursing, good humour. Better flow through out and a more confidently written verse.

Keep up. 

Both need ti fill the box. But this was crazy one sided.. sense, you wrote song lyrics man. That wasnt a battle verse.. you stayed simple.. didnt take rven a jab at your opponent, and it flowed like a song. Godly, I liked the comedic side of your verse man. You had a couple bars that made me chuckle but you didnt stay consistent at all.. You got half way through and the quality declined. Which is a shame cuz the first half was fire. Overall, Godly got this easy. Fairs in

FV in

Get over yourself already.  Noone cares if you like cursing or not.  

Winner took this by properly directing his punches to attack the enemy. Godly you're improving really well, just try to add multi syllable rhymes and  capitalize your rhymes.

Use https://wordcounter.net/ to capitalize them, I find this super easy.

Loser has potential, but this is a battle not a cyper; you need to attack the enemy.  I read your comment about how you don't like cursing and I don't think that's why you lost. You're just a newbie, read other peoples battles like Erk or Bleu. Hit me up if you need tips cause there's a whole bunch you need to fix; but at least you've got an alright vocab.

Winner had a better flow no hate vote back