Winner was better all round

No H8 fv in

Bnas... You're going to Rake his Lactose? I dont get it at all.. Kenny was super basic.. try looking at orber battles to get a feel for it.. fairs in

Right, well right from the off, I'm gonna state that this was a very basic battle. Both read a bit like how suburban white sit coms mimicked rap in the 90s. Bland, wooden, long as the last words rhymed. Imma give you both the benefit and assume that these were rushed efforts. Because there wasn't one effort from either of you to try a metaphor, even a wack one. Metas take statements to creative writing, and we ain't here for statements. 

Bnas gets it for purely trying for multis and commiting less rap clichés (I'm the best - to the test.. *Eurgh*). But as a word of warning, make sure those end rhymes are crisp if you're gonna all caps em, otherwise it makes them even more glaringly obvious if there's a syllable out of place.

Kenny trip, you need to reach outside the box you're in my dude. If you need help let me know, but you need to be attempting some Metas or smilies, even if they come out reaching or corny, cos a couple of them attempts could have won you this. 

WTF has this site come to? This shit was so got damn garbbage i almost threw my comp away! FV.