Bleu impressed me more here with clever lines and got the win .

BRAYNE FARTCES

BRAYNE FARTCES: September 2018 Championship Battle

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KG, kinda all over the place.. very inconsistent.. sometimes it was decent and kinda funny but alot of your punches fell flat.. good wording though for the most part. It flowed well. Bleu, That flow thoughhh lol it was sick.. I loved the opener right up to the "Kg" just dead weight line that was sick. I know this is fartcees so I enjoy how you were able to throw another 2 syllable scheme in there and make it just a bit more complex. Overall, I got Bleu on this one pretty easy tbh, he had stronger punches and a crazy smooth read. Also utilized the 2 syllable schemes better. Fairs in!

You guys are like two hundred levels above me in terms of skill so it's not really my area to critique.

I liked both but I felt Bleu's verse was more enjoyable as it had a better flow and rhymes.

Fair's in, good luck.

Winner was more creative. The name flip into dead weight bar was solid, window pane, yes man/say no all hit harder than his opponents content 

Most enjoyable battle I've read here so far, so well done to both. Kg you had some good ideas dude. Like the bits like the sick wife line. However you've just got to keep an eye on your flow. Sometimes the wording fucked your play, like the hotel bar. You've got the basics, just got to be more strict with your syllables. Bleu, this was a funny verse dude. Highlight was the kg dead weight play, great way to start a verse. Good read guys. 

Close one. I mean, how can I really judge this? I just thought Bleu was a bit more entertaining in the confines of the rules while still coming off smoother. Dimes for obvious reasons. Gb guys.

Winner was a lil more clever given the 2 syllable rhyming restriction. Internal rhymes werr nice too. Gb guys Fairs in

Winner had a better flow no hate vote back