Nasty, you're new as well? Not bad for a starting verse but study better rhyme schemes and try to fill the box for more material to spit. Try to use metaphors and punchlines better next time.Erk, what I expect from one of the best MCs this season. The line "His girl's legs stay open 24-7 like a mcdonald drive thru" was an amazing line. Great rhymes, punchlines and wordplays.

Typoooo, "Like shes Trynna Flank You" lol

Pretty one sided win here

you had guts Nasty1508, you went against the best for your first battle, I RESPECT THAT! youll grow frfr. But I´ll give the W to Erk. Good Job you both

Winner got it with better flow no hate vote back 

Erk showed his expertise in this battle

Erk that verse was dope as fuck, like damn that maccas line was great haha.

Loser needs to take inspiration from the winner. It was good to see a newbie not self hyping, it's just you didn't use multi's and your punches were weak as fuck.

For your very first text battle I guess it wasn't too bad... but it was bad. You should learn how to format your rap into a battle verse first of all. Study Erk's verse for example, he did everything that was necessary to win a text rap battle by formatting the verse correctly and by incorporating actual punchlines into what he wrote. You should definitely study what punchlines are and what wordplay is and study off of rappers such as Erk, Pixels, KG and Seul. Erk, I don't need to explain this in detail for you to know that you absolutely got this in the bag. Great wordplay usage. FV 

Easy choice here as Erk turned in a complete verse to compare with like a third of a verse