Winner took this with better rhymes and flow. I liked your multi's but there was a scare amount. However, it wasn't the best verse I've read, work on using the whole space, multi's, not hyping yourself up  and executing the setups correctly.

Loser's verse had jabs without rhyming and didn't even try to evaluate on any setup; you deticated more space to selfhype. Next time, add multi's, don't selfhype and fix your structure.

Fair's in dudes, nice battle.

thanks 4 the advice, and what do you mean by multi's ?? 

Multi-syllable rhymes.

E.g. My bus driver has a CORRUPTING ATTITUDE. When he gets angry, he's  a vocalno ERUPTING MAGNITUDE.

Back to back punches Montana I liked you're style but you didnt fill up your verse that's the whole reason I didnt give you the battle. Make sure you fill up your space you got soo much more to do great potential you should build you're punches up before landing them . Personas little metaphors here and there but very basic, think outside the box. Fairs in no h8

Good Battle.

No hate winner was aggressive no hate vote back