Winning got this although nothing about his lines were very hard to say the least just need to spice it up in terms of what you say . Lyrical_Terrorist didn't have a whole lot of content and what he did have was subpar for the most part cause bars/prison plays are trash at this point 

Expo: 

Winning is from the hood via. Lousiana New Orleans which means he's still poor. He also has more losses than wins in battle rap.  

Fairs in

ehh

I'm gonna give this to winning, his box is filled all the way. Thats rule 1. Multies are better and concepts executed better than L. I see the potential in L. But, as far as tieing everything together with no capped rhymes. Doesnt make it. 

Lyric was def better, idk what else to say is getting drunk on a flask a diss? second more relatable, harder and easier to read of course you went second, remember, and all of you should keep this in mind, you can't write like your writing a battle your gonna spit, you gotta write best suited for a reader to get a vote, my votes in.

Tonagan kid where are you from?...lol At least 2nd had punches, what are reading? where is rule 1 written? You make zero fn sense..you have to have the concept of a multie. So how is creating a scene not above some multi silly bullshit?

Neither were too bad, Lyrical gotta work on cleaning up those rhymes more and make sure not to hit the Enter button(I’ve had that mistake too so dw lol). Winning you had some good punches but some didn’t land clean(like the castaway bar). Gave the edge to one. Fv

Close but winning had Me thinking more on his punches landed harder to my opinion. Lyrical did a decent job but that prison bar punch is played out. Fairs in no h8 

I went back to read this because the winner you chose was acting like i can't judge, Now poor is somethin we all were so Lyrical or nobody influences my vote. If you feel like you had a hard ass bar point it out, I don't see it. because you wrote a damn verse you think you deserve to win? IDK either of these cats, 2nd verse to me Catchin cases bailin out/get off the streets take a job/ the prison inmate/ chopp you down, it just resonates more, some cats say you he's didn't fill it, well had he put the words diff it woulda been like I see tons of battles here, he arranged it that way to take the approach of a clean delivery for the read, the diversity and creativity, and personally more people in hip hop could relate to the second. Second was simple but the way y'all voted my opinion was wrong.show me a punch a working multi, somethin street, it's just not there.As a courtesy i went back n read it. Punches? what Punches? I don't think either can beat me but than again some of y'all straight corny n just vote to vote and don't keep it a buck I see that.

LT's bars flowed better and had some punches. Winning had great ideas and wordplay but it was not very aggressive.

both were nice 1st guy I like you line " Crumbs from the last bar". but your castaway? reference Lost Me.....2nd guy had more readable flow.....I really felt J O B , take L   OG line, and more bars them inmate lift deadweight....i could hear that isshhh good text battle 2nd guy edged it out for me.  NO H8

i feel like terrorist had harder punches but seems like u both need better practice, gb and fair is in

My winner was easier to follow and had a couple punches that didnt seem as forced. Fairs in. good battle.

Both was good, winner was going in no hate vote back