GONZOkey.

Winner had better punctuation and constant rhymes. Some of your punches made no sense, and a bit of your verse felt like it was self-hype. However, the second half of your verse brought you the homerun.

The loser has improved a bit. Loved some of your punches, especially the one about the car clutch. However, you still NEED to add fullstops, or at least dots "..." Without it caused me to have to reread the verse a few times to finally get a grasp of what you were saying. Also, you ended the paragraph very abrupt, which made it seem like you're a newbie.

Fair's in, good luck.

punches are as like same only theya got dictionary words theya don't know how to rhyme

Decimals line was cool. Other needed some more creative material to qualify.

I give it to street talk simply because his bars were better formatted. The problem with mind is his didn't make sense. Like "mind coming through to knuckleheads and naw i aint GIVING NOOKIES..what..who, street?? you ock more -board walk now you find yourself POLITICING W/ SNOOKIE.." If he gave an expo, i might change my mind.  

Imo one had more experience with better multies.L definetly has potential though if he expanded his multies and tried to stretch the concepts more I think we'd see some stinging punches. Gb yall

Ez