Winner took this by being a bit better overall. Not the best I've read by the winner. Some punches weren't accompanied by a setup and others just made no sense. Also, a lot of your rhymes felt forced as hell.

The loser did aite for his first battle, he attacked his enemy and occupied all the space available. Your punches were creatively writen. However, the punches often missed the enemy as you didn't structure the verse to be read properly. Next time capitalize your rhymes, use correct punctuation and work on multi-syllable rhymes. 

Kryptik sent his verse just as I was about to lmao.

Fair's in, good luck.

Easy. Both should work on their wordplay.

Fairs in

X, you got multis down pretty word but even when they sound cohesive you dont really have any big punches to boot.. I was surprised about the readability.. dope flow. Kryptik, Just doin ya thing.. you had some decent bars in there but poor wording in alot of spots took away from the impact... I gotta give this to Kryptik, for more punches and better iseas. Fairs in.

X had some good rhymes but Krip was way nore advanced here and brought more to the table. X keep practicing, Krypt keep elevating...fairs in...

Winner got bars loser was good with creativity but not a good flow or at least rhyming flow no hate 

ummm.....winner is kryptik

Pull up kryptik for battle

Ez