Steeet.. you surprised me here. You had some good multies and inner schemes.. with some alright punches.. what you need to do is focus making a setup, like a metaphor relating to the punch, and then itll help your punch hit harder when you throw it. Ive seen a massive improvement... also, cap your rhymes or something man.. its easier for people to spot out which words rhyme thatway its commonly an issue of yours, but this time it actually isnt. Also.. try not to reoeat rge same word in a line "Light, christmas lights on top of a tree" ..  irs actually an alright line... neat verse though... Kryptik, I liked your opener, it didnt really stay consistent though.. your verse kinra got bland after the first line.. you still threw punches they were just mehh punches behind some decently strong concepts, some wording is iffy and I expected better.. but still a strong verse.... overall Im gonna give it to Kryptik.. he had more hewvy hitting shots... fairs in. Neat battle.

See and this is how u know I vote fair this kid just voted against me, K shit was harder, not that Street doesn't start or end ok, but if your runnin around claimin to be a street boss, and rappin about cartoons,toys, and mcdonalds, Thats the fakest boss I ever came across, you need to a little math, subtract whats wack, from the back end of this rap,,, I mean if you got ANYTHING in your raps that could be considered corny as fuck and that doesn't line up with a close match your down a point. Every Street Talk battle has some off topic non Street shit in it, so Idk u one of those cats that battle 14 times a day I see.Learn from that shit, I get it's hard because most mfer's here can't write, shit is obscure, like you don't even know wtf they talkin about until you go to the comments and they gave you a fn map, a glossary so not really the place to learn, but a place to get advice.Like nobody street is gonna rap about cat dog, and no poet would spell Nickelodeon wrong. so that my vote 21.

Street takes it

lol good battle G and good looks on the feed back 

im going Street, as in how he did his Beef. if i had voted wrong my appoliges. 

Winner had better setups that lead to harder hitting punches

I gotta give it to Kryptik. Street Talk was good with some lines like the "lines in your mouth" bar. I felt like he could've done more with the Christmas line. Some lines seemed like fillers to me like the watermelon bar. Kryptik did better. He came up with more creative lines like "i split ya frame in sections", "i'm sure these bars scared you straight like convicts.." Street talk needs to work more on similes, metaphors, and wordplay. 

I don't mean to attack you guys, but this was the battle of off-point metaphors. Some of the stuff in this battle was incredibly awkward or forced.

From STREET TALK, we have: "you need lines in your mouth more like flossin your teeth" < So Dental Floss = Lines? That's new to me. Then just four slashes later, we have: "weapon shine it aint december but still open these gifts on you like it was present time" < Guns = Gifts? That makes more sense but I've still never heard guns or bullets called "gifts." These punchlines were just straight-up bad, which is a shame because the verse was well-structured, with sensible setups and fluent rhyming. I would recommend that you adopt the style of capitalizing your rhymes and putting your setups in quotes, which is standard on LetsBeef. Check out how some more experienced battlers do it and model your verses after theirs.

Kryptik, your verse brought similar problems. For example, what in the world is a "gay abduction murder?" The bar makes sense but I've never heard of anything called a gay abduction murder, so it's a reach. I'm not sure what you were trying to convey with the better than street's > highway construction workers connection. I did like the home decor photo designs punch, which was easily the best of the battle. Overall, this verse was better structured than STREET TALK's, and had a slightly higher punch quantity. I think that put you ahead just enough to come out on top. Fair's in.