Deadbeat, tbh man this wasnt that strong of a verse.. You had no multies, and it was all self hype.. No punches towards your opponent at all, which is kind of the point of a battle... Zak, tbh your opener was pretty lit but poor wording affected the impact of the punch..your closer was definitely the highlight.. Good wording with a solid punch to follow suit... The setup coulda been better but otherwise it was solid... Overall its pretty one sided. Im giving it to Zak for stronger and more punches, with fresher ideas behind his verse. The fairs in boys! Return it if you want.

Yo DeadBeat that verse was killer for like a song, story kind of feel to it. Zak just had that battle verse, I liked the punchess and steady rhymes.. Microsoft play was slick, liked the veggies deal too... 

Deadbeat Dad had a decent verse, think it woulda sounded dope in a audio cypher. ZakWon hit em with the stronger punches, and had stand out line here and there. He set up his punches how they are supposed to be set up, which really helped his execution, enjoyed his inner rhyming in areas too. Fairs in, MVGT Zakwon.