Lil Brothar you need to learn how to format your verse into a battle verse and not a text verse. You had great ideas though they were fire. I'm really not sure who to vote for because despite you and Lil Translate being basically at par with each other he used an actual battle format instead of a cypher format. So I think I'm going to go with him. FV GB

Translate had some okay rhymes and lines, overall just had substance as far as the "Battle" goes haha

Brotha keep practicin, make some good disses and bars, try to not get stuck up in one little section of rhymes over and over

This one go to Translate, GB.

Agree with Saiyan's breakdown, both could be better but pretty evenly matched, one edged this barely. Also seemed like LIL BROTHAR's verse were song lyrics instead of being rap battle material. Fair's in fellas.

HaHa, Brothar, did u really end ur post by saying u gonna kill ur self? 

Both were pretty sketchy overall. But trans just had more punches. You guys need to do a fuck ton of work on your rapping style before considering rap battles. [WOO]

Not a good battle.. Translate was choppy as hell but he had punches.. none hit hard though, and didnt have a single multi all throughout. Brothar tried making it into a new style rap song and honestly.. it didnt work at all. Clear winner. Fairs there folks

Winner simply had better bars. Loser seems new, too. Could have had more material with that box. Most bars weren't strong but decent concepts

I think Lil Translate's advantage other than I think lil brother was trying to write some club banger where he's actually singing on a track is that lil translate had humor. The shock the kids dual shot, made me laugh out loud. Overall it was still mostly comical from translate, but it worked for this batttle. Lil brother read some top tier battlers, and find some structure that doesn't resemble a song that should be singed outloud to sound good. Vote Translate.