Slender, you had really goos flow the whole way through it made for an easy read.. no multis really affected the quality though.. and well I mean while your punches werent bad.. the wording really affected the power behind them, not a bad verse though.. Nickle I liked your inner rhymes.. usually it helps alot with making the punch hit home,however your wording made that not the case.. and the concepts were really played out.... Overall, I gotta give this to Slender. He had fresher concepts with slightly better wording tocmake his punches connect. It was close as hell, could go either way. Fairs in guys!

This could go either way since both were kinda the same here ... Y'all brought some basic rhyming, and your bars weren't structured effectively. They weren't direct enough and with the ideas you did have, the actual punch could've been set up a lot better ... Both of you should read more battles and structure your bars with better multis (2 syllables are too basic and can't really add impact, try 4 then upwards once you get the hang of it.) Try being more complex when executing your bars, think of all the different flips then base your setups of one which is direct and can form a solid punch ... I ain't the best but that's what I'd say improve on, I'mma vote for the one who I felt was more direct here and slightly more humerous, fair's in

Winner had better flow no hate vote back 

barely give it to nickle