Expo:

Every line is easy to understand, and each line contains 12 syllables.

Nickle got this with a bit stronger of a structure here both in terms of line composition and rhyming. Also felt like he had more direct punches to the opponent but neither was overly direct. Think both could do with aiming more attacks right at their opponent and cut down on the cypher style lines.

Hallow, you defintetly sidnt even try to throw a punch.. some of the linee were decent, but you didnt have any wow moments in your verse.. the poor wording affected the overall quality of your verse... Nickle, I felt like alot of your rhymes were reaches here dude.. and the pubches you dis have just didnt hit home for me at all.. the concepts were alright.. but the execution was off.... Im goinf for Nickle, because he has more punches, and was much better conceptually