this just a copy of what i had already, posted so come and post to my beef i feel as if it is just waiting for somone to post and take the battle to there level.

Hallow: Idk man, this verse definitely wasnt made for battle.. there's no punches, and pretty much just simple self hype lines.. Banque: I see alot of potential! Your multis were nice there for a bit, but you also really lacked punches.. also seemed like you strung words together and forced it.. punches are the point of battle... My vote ie goin to Banque for the more enjoyable verse.

Both were mediocre, I felt Banquo had potential but as a result of his rhymes feeling like they were stuttured. Both need to capitalize their rhymes. I only voted for hallow because his flow was better and he had a few better blows. 

No H8 but loser just didn't seem to meet any thing u need to meet to get a vote, may just be me IDK but fab in

Loser was ok beginner style, winner was a beginner too but flow was better no hate vote back 

Even though Banquo dropped off at the end I want to say he took it. I feel like hallow was trying to see how much mushrooms he could drop and still stay coheirant. Hallow u got potiental dont get me wrong, you lack structure like a motherfucer. At least Banquo put in the //// to let you know when a bar was done. You had a paragraph of alice drops down the rabbits hole, alice licks the rabbits hole, my state of mind is a rabbit yo. Marry poppins get hawkings bullet's , like bullet is 's so it means the bullet has ownership. You almost made my autism look petty my friend. Good run chaps, get at it again. Banquo landslide