Back for this one.

Winner had a vicious ending line and loser was Fire as well just felt winner went in harder with ending verse 

fv no hate

Read this multipls times, def Hollister deserve expo.. .  Both had the same type of wordplay and scheme delivery , making it close.  Kryptik had a smoother connection between punches making the read flow better, the wording adding charisma.  Saiyan was more technical with more complex wordplay.  This can go either way depending on voters taste.  Kryptic had better multies , and both had same level punches. .

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So kryptic Edged! HIGH 7S  Fair

Kryptik

' "Bloody watch"... Kryp IMPRESS THE SICKEST TIMES, If you NEXT TA GET IT FINE... We "bidding over dope & ya smack aint good" you REGRET SUBMITED LINES '

As a punch I felt it didn't really hit hard, but the execution was spot on, so it had some sting

' Fake bars need VALIDATED PROOF, You AGGRIVATED GOOF, I "got these jokes numbers" like a CALCULATED SPOOF... Then "Get a'head while it's fresh" like DECAPITATED YOUTH!! '

Dope. Relevant build up with a nice jab then a solid punchline, CALCULATED SPOOF bit was funny

' I'm like a "fat carpenter" how I DRILL EM WITH THA TOAST, You DEALIN WITH THA MOST... I'm the "paper boy wit a vicious arm"... So I KILL EM WITH A POST!! '

Dope again, but not setup as well as the previous bar so it lacked that extra sting, but still a nice lil punch with a humerous edge to it

' You spit "trash" it's SLEEZY IT'll FILL DUMPS... Like #1 songs an EASY HIT'll THRILL CHUMPS, For you I "flip out & box bodies on screen" like YEEZY WIT A LIL PUMP!! '

Very good ender with a better build up too, felt this landed well cos of the good execution

Overall: Verse was high and mid in terms of punches and how they were executed, no lows imo, a little bit inconsistent but quite good 

Saiyan

' It’s cute he’s trying to SHOOT WITH WEAK CURSIVE when it’s clear at the “Height Of His Growth” he’s catching “Pain That’ll Alter His Body” - the “PUBERTY VERSION” so if it’s a “Quick Burial He Wants” then a “EULOGY’S WORTHLESS” when these hooks leave “Crypt Underground” like the “ROOMS BENEATH CHURCHES!!” '

Fuckin hell, from the setup before PUBERTY VERSION to the end this was mad dope. Nameflip also added some sting, punch landed quite well, coulda shortened the setup to PUBERTY VERISION just a bit but apart from that the bar was filled with jabs leading to a strong final punch

' if he's ever brought “Crack” to the “TABLE” it's “POWDERY SUBSTANCE” Taking L's is what I'm Far From Doing so if I'm “Charged With Losing?” then in these “CASES” I'm “DOUBTING ASSUMPTIONS!” and by now he couldn't “Conjure Up Hope” so saying “PRAYERS” is “COUNTER PRODUCTIVE!! '

Another nice bar, not as good as the first one but still was nice, felt everything was relevant and the flips weren't as creative but they were executed well, and the punch still landed

Overall: A really good verse, high in terms of punches and high to mid for execution, punches stood out and the jabs were nice too

Got my winner with a better job o being consistant here, just felt he started and ended his verse with more creativity, and the relevance between his concepts and his execution was better ... Fair's in, dope shit on both sides

The Fire Nation