Quite an easy choice here, going w/ Fridgid. Loser needs to get the basics down, from filling the box, to setting up a proper punch line. I suggest he read some of the higher tiered battlers, battles - & pick up some pointers. For my winner, although he had the better verse, he also made quite a few errors in terms of broken multis, and some WP that didn't work well. Multi sets should be the same syllable count, otherwise you will be docked points. Also be mindful of the WP, it's gotta work both ways that its meant, grammatically. You did well in terms of thinking outside of the box, and attempting to go above and beyond creatively, but it hurt you a little bit here. Focus on structuring your verse so that it has at least 4 punch lines (2 lines per punch = total 8 lines) That goes for both of yall. I hope this helps, in one way or another. If yall need more feed just drop some bars in my private messages and I can help you break them down. Fairs in.

i like the mike tyson line very creative

and thing about the  right hooks i call this tko...lol

Nice battle Fridgid, to bad it wasn't a ranked battle man, this was dope bro