Its OPS bitch!

...Ops! :high:

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i think both did their disses here, but both used too much wp in my opinion, but nice punchlines though. Phe i was little thrown off by "cause" and "smalls/calls" i dont think cause matched rhymed da other 2. "doctor ya smalls" i personally dont know what dat means. i think "end his verse" instead of "end ya verse" wouldve rhymed better w/ "jenifer" u definitley got potential n talent just feel like u could reword some verses. but u got a nice flow.

Row u had a nice verse too. i like da "comet/rudolph" that was pretty funny. the dime/sense maybe u could also mentioned "cents" in there as well to refer the dime. Not knockin dis verse, but i kinda got a little thrown off by "in arenas" wit "payment wit visas"...but i think u did a bit better than ur opponent , it shows good talent n i think u had harder punchlines .

Fair Vote....no h8...fun battle to read

Phe..good rhyming here. Tbh I liked the delivery u had. I didn't like the bra/brawl wp. They just don't sound enough alike imo.. Last part of the smoking weed in ur whip line was pretty clever and had a personal within so that was dope. Band camp line was clean with the trumpet deal and blow it again. Well done on the srtup and teh punch there. Jennifer Aniston nips was actually funny... Rohaan with a pen and no win tournament is very slanted. Imo ur closer didn't hit.. THE last punch felt more like something I'd see in a setup for a punch. Just didn't have that sting to it. Better execution would've helped here.

ROW ur opener had 3 different wp's in it as well as a personal. Typically I don't like when people just go with back to back to back one liners but u finished it all off with a strong final punch imo given it was personal so I won't deduct many points. Liked the yacht with an oar line.. Nice lil wp but somewhat predictable. U followed it up with a dope ass abort line tho. Without 'stop it for your safety' it wouldn't have hit but that extra bit in the setup did it here and made it hit. Doesn't make a lot of sense didn't really hit imo was pretty weak and simplistic. Closer hit hard with aggressive delivery.

Phe u had dope material but row came with the more complex ideas here and better execution and for that he takes the W. Great read, both. 

phe i hate to criticize you like this but your verse was straight up full of trash. brawl and bra do not sound alike unless you have shit in your mouth, calling your opponent a "hoe in need of a dick" is beyond pauseworthy as a motherfucker, rohaan is indian not arabic... but i digress. overall the verse had solid structure, great readable flow except some forced rhyming in the last bar. none of the punches impressed me though. the band camp line was the best here which is a sad reflection on what kind of concepts you had here.

row - using slashes in place of "and" to make multis work??? really?!?!?! that's a horrid way to start a verse. and what does mopping a floor have to do with being wet behind the ears lmao... that must be one hell of a wet floor for the water to be getting behind the janitor's EARS... phe diss / fetus had strong execution but cmon man that wordplay so basic that it's basically lye. dime / sense is even worse than that. i can kind of get behind the credit / visas bar even though it's basic but the zebra punch right after it was just horrible. urn is a NOUN not a VERB, i get what you were trying to convey but that is so much of a reach that you should be thankful you live in canada, down here they would charge you 35k for the shoulder replacement. closer was alright but wasn't really feeling a phe/fee wordplay even though you added something of a spin to it.

overall... wasn't impressed by either verse, both were similar in that they had strong execution that was wasted on trash punches. i think i gotta go with row overall though, his punches were slightly more clever on average and i think his multis had more swagger to them which resulted in a more enjoyable to read verse. yall both need to quit reaching left and right though. write shit that makes sense in the actual english language. fv

gb fv

This was close and a good battles on both sides. My winner took this with cleaner concepts and harder hitting punches. Loser's personals were nice and I feel like they went over people's heads at second glance but it still wasn't enough to take this. Both took chances but winner had fewer mistakes. Thanks for the reads gents, this deserves more votes.

Neither stood out for me here as both reached but Row was a bit cleaner.