Fierce's verse came off as a little choppy in parts, though after re-reading enough, I got his flow down. I thought some of the punches could have hit a bit harder, if used differently (like the B&E/Pottery class line) At the end, it sort of fell off. No hate Fierce. It was a good attempt. 

Kriminal's verse was better structured with more consistant, innovative lines that punched harder. (I crackied a smile over the "hole in his teddy bear") Nice use of multis with textbook setup and delivery. 

Fv as I see it. I don't pick favorites. Good battle guys. 

u both did pretty nice fierce pro i liie the "nintendo trick" bar that was nice but u didnt fill the space in the box completley, but u almost did so try filling it all up like ur opponent.

kriminal i think this is one of ur best bits here u really captivated the multis and worplay made good punches to ur opponent. i like the 'smashed with a battle axe' i like medieval concepts. so good job.

FV.

Fierce Pro, you've got the multi's down pretty good, you've just got to work on the structure from set-up to punchlines, felt like your verse had mostly jabs and parts were filler (not necessarily needed). KrImInal, you had a few played concepts but you've got the set-ups/punchs down, enough to take this battle. Good battle fellas, fair's in.

Pho-Sev-Pho