BOWEN HAS SOME NICE IDEAS, I DID LIKE THA THROWN INTO THA WELL BY A LITTLE GIRL PART THAT DID MAKE ME SMILE.  YOU JUS NEED TO WORK ON CAPPIN YOUR MULTI's, AND GO FOR 3/4 SYLLABLED RHYMES, WORK ON SETTING UP PUNCHLINES SO YOUR VERSE HAS MORE IMPACT, LIKE I SAID YOU HAVE GOOD IDEAS YOU JUST NEED TO DELIVER YOUR CONCEPTS IN A STRONGER WAY........ NICKLE YOU ALSO HAD SOME NICE IDEAS IN YOUR VERSE, BUT LIKE YOUR OPPONANT YOU NEED TO WORK ON YOUR STRUCTURE SO THA DELIVERY BECOMES CLEANER (ie cappin rhymes), AND AGAIN LIKE YOUR OPPONANT YOUR OPENING LINE WOZ THA BEST PART OF YOUR VERSE.  NOT SURE WHAT YOU WERE RHYMING 'EQUAL FOOTING' WITH ON THA 2ND TO LAST LINE THO....... ITS A CLOSE CALL THIS ONE COZ I FELT BOTH HAD A GOOD FIRST LINE, IN THA MIDDLE I FELT BOWEN WOZ SLIGHTLY AHEAD, THEN FINAL FEW LINES I THOUGHT NICKLE FINISHED THA BETTER.  OK IVE READ IT AGAIN AN IM SLIGHTLY LEANIN TOWARDS BOWEN HERE AS I FELT HE WOZ SLIGHTLY MORE CONSISTANT FROM TOP TO BOTTOM, VERY CLOSE CALL THO..... GL TO BOTH.... FAIR IS DROPPED!

^^^^^ MEANT TO SAY NICKLE WOZ SLIGHTLY BETTER IN THA MIDDLE AND BOWEN FINISHED STRONGER.

wooden swords cut your umbellical swords? hahah too funny ...fv

wooden swords cut your umbellical cords ** lol

i felt Nickles did better. keep elevating guys.....

My winner had harder disses and was straight to the point. His opponent brag rapped a little too much and it took away from his insults.

Got Bowen taking it by being that bit more coherent and clear with some easier to spot rhymes and punches carved out.