Burying the rapture line was okay, the set up building up to it like berries in a pasture was ight. Would like to hear better references. You should stick to what you're doing in the ending half of your verse. Focus more on storytelling, you had better execution later on because of it.

Well KG I guess you must be Thor with the magic pen cause I am shocked by your words. But I though your metaphors came off cleaner in general. I understood the general gist of it. And it was was nice. Fair is in

APOC!

978 elevatin, kg fuckin brought da apoc shit hard

Truuuuuuchainnnzzzzzz

Ayoo goodshit KG

you too broo

Thought both were good here. One did better than I expected. KG took this with better flow and schemed rhymes while keeping wording clean. KG was more complex with both rhymes and punches where as Nine was good but just a bit basic by comparison an also his set ups were less relevant than cageys.