Apoc!! don't mess with tha Ginge

Winner out multid the loser. Slight better dishes but not a ton of substance from either. 

Expo please 

Michael Jackson moon walks and BENADIC Arnold is an over easy egg

Hmm, both need a little work. Here's why:

Crimson,

Your verses structure hindered your ability to land a real strong blow. I would spend at least 2 lines, per bar. So 8 lines, 4 bars -overall. This way, you got enough space to "Set-Up" your bar, to have a strong final "PUNCH!!!" to it. You had some broken multis also, you always want to ensure that all multis are the same syllable count.

Example:

POPPIN' THE NINE (4syllables)

DROPPIN' A BLIND (4 syllables)

Another thing, is your bars were kinda reachy at points. A red grenade? Try to keep your creativeness, without making stuff up, if you get what I mean. There's some more things, but I don't want you to think im talking shit about you, I am jus' pointing out some things I think would help increase your writing ability. PM me bars after, if you need anymore help/break-down.

Ginge,

You started out decent, I liked the improvise a beat down bit, first two multi sets were okay, but I woulda tried to make "FUCKIN / THAT MY" rhyme better, or un-cap 'em. You followed this up, with a broken multi during the grandma part. Keep an eye out for stuff like that. The rest of your verse was lacking some real originality, the card I sent you, forgot the venue, schlong on menu, I didn't see any creative writing in there really, jus' rhyming the words (which is easy....) Crim's in Psych Wards, was not the best WP imo, no one calls criminals, crims. So this was a bit reachy.

This is close, based off how many mistakes yall made. I think I am going to slightly edge this to Ginge due to a better opener, and a little more creativity here and there, Another reason I am voting this way, is because I feel Crimson had some played material, for example the moses bit, michael jackson / moon walk bar. These concepts for bars, have been done x100.

Fairs in yall, decent battle.

4-5, mid to low.

Ginge had slightly more control over the rhythm on page.

crims is a frase in da uk doe, dere wuz a tv show cald dat n everythin but yh dis wuz sum kwik shit, ten/15 min job but stil prity weak, stil i rate da line about da grandma so dere

VERY

Seemed pretty obvious here even before I read it

Swainy cleery got a short memory frum wen i beet him unanimus haha

Deleted eminemsumo113vreal and BoiSwainy's hate votes.

yo ginge is a pussy

crimsonphsych clearly won 

4gucci a big fan, man bin checkin all my old batles, respect g, i aint got da patience 2 trawl thru da retarded shit u drop cuz