978 u losin points 4 double rimin both round n down my g, plus long, my feedbak on da other batle wud serve u well, all i wud say 4 u 2 start elevatin is, use how u rime multis 2 work backwards from a hard punch n try n make da setups relevant, make sure da setups r even in flow n not so long, i try n cut down 2 da bare minimum sumtimes, caz if da SETUPS ARE BULKY/ u end up talkin so much in da interim dat da voters r strugglin 2 even ReMEMBER DA MULTI, No wat i meen? 

amateur beggar, was just 2 far from da batle 4mat of da site an in general 2 score high, n da punches jus dint sting 4 me, reed sum mor batles, take sum advise u'll b good

NINE HAD A BETTER STRUCTURE AN SET HIS LINES UP BETTER, BUT YOU RHYMED 'DOWN' TWICE AND 'LONG' TWICE WHICH IS NOT A GOOD LOOK IF IM HONEST, THA RHYMIN WAS VERY BASIC IN THA FIRST HALF IF IM HONEST, 2ND HALF WOZ ALOT BETTER AS YOU RAISED THA SYLLABLE COUNT AN ENDED THA VERSE WIT A FINNY PART, NOT A GREAT VERSE AS A WHOLE THO IF IM HONEST...... AB HAD A VERY LAZY STRUCTURE, SOME SMALL PARTS WERE OKish BUT YOU RHYMED 'DADDY' TWICE, 'TALLY' TWICE AND ALSO RHYMED 'DOE' TWICE WHICH IN AN 8LINE BATTLE IS UNFORGIVABLE..... WASNT FEELIN EITHER VERSE REALLY BUT MY VOTE GOES TO NINE AS HE STRUCTURED HIS VERSE AN PUNCHES ALOT BETTER THAN HIS OPPONANT AN THAT MADE FOR A BETTER READ..... FAIR IS DROPPED!

Fairly clear victory, one didn't fill the box. Where I think nine7eight can improve, I have stated via IM to him, or within other recent votes on his battles. Amateur Beggar, you will be docked points heavily for not filling the entire box, as 8 lines is not much writing at all. Apart from that your rhyming was okay, but ideas were simple and creativity wise you were lacking. Fairs in.

4-3, mid to mid.

Neither dude was really spittin too much heat or actually any punchlines in general. But, with better flow, slightly more complex rhymes, and 2x the content, Nine7Eight wins this fairly easily. My advice to both would be to work on a more of a set-up -> punch style approach in attacking the opponent and avoid vague lines specifically lines centered on self hype. 

Winner took this with better structure, punches, and multis.. Loser was more basic. A tip to the winner though, next time come with bigger multis and harder punches..it was enough to win this battle but against other opponents on here, that stuff wont cut it. Voted, Fair. Do the same.