Clear winner here but neither were even remotely decent

Felt one had no puns or decent set ups here one came hard conceptually.

Good job to both emcees nine 7 killed it 

TMC - Your verse didn't read bad, but it didn't hit too hard either. Punches & multies were basic.Nine - Funny intro, falls off in spots but cool style. Harder punches & nicer multies imo.The fair is in...

Winner was better in most of the components. Loser needs to work more on his punches and try filling the box more. Fairs in

Cheese, you need be consistent if you start a pattern for four bars in an 8 bar rap, you started off strongest at the beginning with the internal rhyme punctuated by the triplet, but then you get lazier with the lyrics for a minute until you get comfortable with a new rhyme pattern by the end. Nine7, you kept on track your line about snipes makes no sense, don't sacrifice an understandability for a punchline. No hate just one opinion, both did well.

That's my opinion, homie.

Hate voting ass

MasterCheese had some actual good rhyming, jus' lacked any real creativity to get off a punch with big impact. I liked his rhyme schemes though, sounded dope when read aloud. nine7eight, also went multi heavy, but was also lackin' creativity, I do think he had 1-2 ideas that could of been set up well to be good punches, example: pay it w/ your life bar. I am leaning this way, 'cause one filled the box and think he had slightly better hits. Good luck to both though, yall have mad potential. Hit me up if you wanna break down some bars, and I can try and help out as best as I can. Fairs in yall

4-5, low to mid.

GG Ez