Brayne had some witty shit here, 1st one was whack in terms of punch but was funny, 2nd one you said 'bark' and 'barkin' lol but this time tha punch was good, 3rd bar was well executed but tha wp didn't really work both ways but tha multi work was slick, last bar made me go woah cos i did not expect that lmao ... Dj i take it that tha '/' is tha ending of ya bar, 1st one you started well with tha setups up until tha 'detergent shine' after that it was like a load of simple rhyming with no decent final punch, 2nd bar was badly worded from start to finish like you was tryna be really comple but it dindn't pay off, last bar made me lol but it could have been better with a more witty setup, if you was more direct like your final bar tha punches woulda landed with more sting, try being more creative and attack minded when wordin your concepts too to have a better execution ... fair's in 

tryna be really *complex

Honestly it was pretty clear who won for me, simple fact being I could actually visualize djbinkys flow a lot clearer .

I've got one taking this with harder punches and syylables fairs in

Ha I didn’t even try on this 

I slept they this one 

Nice work

brayne ded, sum simple, funy, old scool shit, smooth read

bink da last line uz a hilite but u no dis wernt gud

Brain  first punch wasnt really a hard hitter but I did kinda enjoy it. Not gonna score big but personally thought it was cool. Next punch, kinda the same. Didnt end in a hard hitting line but still had some merit. Pen is illin is quite played. You flipped it ok but nothing crazy. Last bar was lols but not a real haymaker either. Verse is a 5 or 6. 

DJ had some ok material but it wasnt structured well. Punches weren't set up to standard. Lot of filler. Verse is a 4.

OK...... LETS START WIT BRAYNE..... LIKED THA 'BE A GOOD GIRL AN CATCH IT FOR ME' PART THAT WOZ REALLY NICELY WORDED, NEXT PART I DIDNT LIKE HOW YOU HAD 'BARK' AND 'BARKING' SO CLOSE TOGETHER AS THAT SEEMED A LIL LAZY IF IM HONEST, BUT THA 'ARCHIN FOR THA LONG D' PART I LIKED.  WP IN THA NEXT PART WOZ OK, CLOSER WOZ A NICE TOUCH...... DJ HAD A REALLY LAZY STRUCTURE BUT SOME PARTS I LIKED, THA 'DETERGENT SHINE' WOZ QUITE QUIRKY, THA MIDDLE SECTION WOZ ACTUALLY HARD TO FOLLOW AT TIMES DUE TO NO GRAMMAR, CLOSER WOZ OK BUT YOU REALLY NEED TO START CAPPIN YOUR RHYMES AN SEPERATIN BARS MORE EFFICIENTLY...... ALL IN ALL BRAYNE WOZ MORE CONSISTANT WIT THA HITS AN HAD A CLEANER VERSE.....GOOD READ FROM BOTH THO....FAIR IS DROPPED!

Fair

Winner was consistent with his jabs here. Solid verse overall. Loser had some hits but weren't as hard hitting as those of his opponent. Fairs in

Respond to the 16 dude 

who cares if you beat me on this one @B