Generally I could’ve done better, tried to make a unique theme with corn and an afterlife. Pretty much the person gets killed and reincarnated into corn because where he got buried.

hes then corn and gets popped (again) making him popcorn bringing up the fantasy he’s in a cinema connecting he’s seen this gorey movie before he was corn. Also was an incest apparently.

*this is for who couldn’t follow*

expo:

if you "take tha bull by it's horns" you try approaching a problem directly 

Not base tho

Easy take here. Boi was just using way too many 1 syllable rhymes and I was not feeling the concept whatsoever even after going over and over the expo given. Just wasn't hitting hard enough and didn't have enough direction to it as far as being a BATTLE verse. Again, I think Boi has potential as I've seen in previous battle but I think the verse just needs to be more geared towards a BATTLE. KG, creative stuff here for sure bro and wording was a lot better. Couple things I wanted to harp on.

"he'd get fucked up if i saw him like WHORES IN LASER TAG" what does that mean? like where is the WHORES part coming from or relevant to at all? And why laser tag? Just didn't really make sense at all to me. The race concept was good and properly executed. CLARK W A SPOON was ok but the set up was pretty irrelelevant so took some sting off. the next one, "come direct to deal with me" that one was just too similar to the first line "come face to face with me" so I took some points off there for repeating tbh. Closing punch was nice though. So it was a bit of an up and down verse for me if I'm honest but wording stayed good throughout and rhyming was consistent so it was more than enough to take a win here. 

felt one came harder with the wordplay . FI fellas

@ KG I get your metaphors turned into punches but lazer tag didn’t connect to anything was a lazy set up just to get to a given punch?..”Slow to the mark” bit stretchy but then the end punch was meh to me not that effective how is he is in the last place and still wins? Lol Clark serving with Spoon it’s hilarious I get what you were trying to do here..left on his ass and then progressing to bull by the horns? Realy doesn’t do it for me.. Boi: your first problem here is you had 1 Syllable rhymes and some were broken lol try to read what the top tier texcees like Seul are doing and you will be on your way to glory..