Sorry it took so long to respond, been on vacation.

One came harder imo fair vote

Eh, k-melo deffinetly lost

This shit is a good fucking read, good shit leet

Dope shit, pretty fuckin original from both, elite rhymist just had such fantastic flow comparative on the page.

Think Leet took this quite easily, w/ the better personal attacks (attacking Canada) and better multi usage throughout, some areas of iffy rhyming, though. Both could of set-up their bars to hit harder as well. I would suggest yall spend at least 2 lines per bar, and fit in 4 bars for an entire 8 liner. This way you got enough space to really set-up your punch lines and tie in multiple ideas to one concept that really make a bar stand out. As it stands, the short bar type yall going for, jus' doesn't hit hard unless the set-up you use is THAT clever, and even then, more space spent on a bar, done right - can only increase its impact. Be careful in forcing WP's as well, it can really hinder a read. If yall need anymore expo, please let me know and I'll try and break it down bar for bar for you.

4-5, mid to low.

Seul yeah I wouldn't mind a bar by bar or line by line critique if you got the time.

Definitely down for a bar for bar breakdown, looking to improve any way I can

Send me new bars, that you haven't posted yet. I want to show you guys what you can do to improve the bar / what is negative about the bar.

fv.

leet had better multis, but that 'elitist/l leet is' line' was real clever