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Closest Battle I've Read all Month. Quick Expo. Both Had Punches. Rai, YoubWere Reaching For a New delivery and It was Cool, But sometimes your punch was So abstract it adverted my attention from the PunchPunch to trying to decipher what the meaning was but Overall the verse was Flyy. Said' u Kept Using Hand in the Setup and the Punch. Ughh I hate that! Makes the read sound redundant. But other than that slight blunder. I felt like your punches had more Zip and Zing and Stability. Good battle fellas

voting with this acct,  so i cant see any other votes since this is close as fuck... also, i have same vp as my main.. anyway.. ill reread this a few more times and be back with decision.. 

Both had their moments..My loser had a couple decent lines but felt there was a lot of filler where there could of been punches. My winner had a nice opening line, kept pretty consistant throughout and multis where nice. Voted, Fair. Do the Same.

mmm this'll need a few reads lol, be back l8trrs

Thought Rai edged this for a couple reasons. Although its not a scheme battle, scheming the whole thing shows the extra little bit of skill and also helps the verse to flow nicely. I give Rai a bit of a bonus here for doing this, but not a ton because it isn't a scheme battle and wouldn't be fair to judge it like one. But, I also felt Rai was just more consistent top to bottom with punches. Nothing I'd classify as a Haymaker but nothing I'd say that fell flat. Whereas Saiyann I felt had a good closing few punches to his drop but the middle felt a bit stale. For Rai, choking midgets up to the yankees hat and the closer were my highlights. If there's one punch I'd pick on, if i had to, would be the Yoda one. I wouldn't describe Yoda as someone with a "light head". In fact, not even too sure what that's supposed to mean, light as in weight wise? I guess so but dunno what that would have to do with fitting into vadors mask. Just was weird wording to me. Saiy, I would have to say that the Handjob punch was really gay and corny to me. You also used Hands twice, twice.  hands never cause friction/ weak supply of handjobs in 1 line. And then his hands never throw abrasive hand sets in another line. Might sound nitpicky but i think choice of words is pretty important and so to do that twice shows me a lack of attention to that detail. Highlight for you would be the Rockstar logo and after school detention, nice ideas and well executed.

(Feel like I need to nitpick when you have 2 ppl that have the fundamentals down)

So, as I said. With a slightly more entertaining read, more consistent content and not as many technical lapses coupled with just as creative punches, I am going with Rai. GB!

Rai I thought your verse was very graphic and detailed but they may have been to your detriment especially in the beginning of your verse. That being said you finished your verse off strong. Saiyan we'll just skip past that handjobs line for now. Saiyan came with some bars. One of the better flows I've seen on here. May not have been as complex as Rai's but was a better read.

i got Rai takin this with more punches and a good use of his scheme, tha concepts he used were executed nicely ... Saiyan did good as well but his bars were longer which meant little jabs inbetween his final punches, which is not a bad idea but imo they weren't landing with enough sting or tha vote would have gone to Sai ... fair's in

If you stand above the rest?? your TOES ARE SITTING ON A BLANKET, FAG it'll be so low when you step down- HOLMES YOUR LIVING IN A BASEMENT HATCH!

^^^ wasnt feeling the setup, toes sitting on a blanket, is a bit of a reach, and most likely a way to simply continue the scheme.. living in a basement hatch was ok, but felt the quoted concept couldve been a bit more creative than 'so low when you step down'...i wouldve said 'its a disaster if you lift this open',..but no tornaDO IS SPINNIN TO YOUR BASEMENT HATCH/

Told your wife I'd kill her when I PHONED THE DIGITS TO YOUR PLACE TO CRASH Said if I HOLD THE BISCUIT AND THEN AIM IT FAST? It'll be a "A Bloody Mess Of Your Short Commings" but I ain't CHOKING MIDGIT'S TIL THE BRAINS EXRACT!! 

^^^^^^^^^^wasnt a huge fan of the setup, which didnt corelate well with the end, you start off with holding a gun, and end with a blood mess, but then the 'shortcomings' kinda came outta left field, just to justify the mutli word 'midgets'....

That last battle you did?? was a JOKE SUBMITTED, COZ IT MADE US LAUGH how's he 'gon say I'm the one that's washed up, with NO INTENTION TO GIVE PLATES A BATH?

^^^^^setup was decent, but again wasnt to fond of the concept which didnt really tie in too well with the multi punch.. your the one thats washed up, but how else can the plates fit in? this is another case where the multi scheme kinda overstepped the concept itself just to make it work.. you need to word the concept quoteplay, to either relate more so  or reword the multi so it doesnt feel like your adding irrelavent words just to keep the scheme..

Anny up mother fucker, throw those POKER CHIPS INTO THE BANKER'S STACK coz if this "Scrub Is Raising The Bill"?? It's doing LOADS OF DISHES IN HIS YANKEES HAT!!

^^^^^^^^^^^^same here, this one doesnt feel like an insult that makes much sense.. what do you mean by if this scrub is raisin the bill? is that implying he's adding to an expense? or that hes making the card/bill that hes on with his opponent alot higher in ratings? its very vague, also i wouldve reworded it to this im bringin 'top billin for this scrub' but aint doin LOADS OF DISHES IN HIS YANKEE HAT/

Look little dude I'll smoke you...BRO ADMIT YOU HIT THE DANKEST GRASS, but are "Too Light Headed To Face It"- like tryna make YODA FIT INTO A VADOR MASK!!

^^^^prolly your best bar setup was alot more relavent towards your end result..

They say Ock-Has-Ill-Schemes, then is that why his "Drops Are Still Green" as OKRA PICKING WITH A TATER SACK??You ain't on the ROAD TO RICHES, YOU JUST PAVED THE PATH Me? I'll run over you. Leave a HOLE IMPRINTED where THE PAVEMENT CRACKED!

IMAGRY was decent, and pretty agressive, but basically filler

we'll see your "ABC's Crash & Burn" w/o a LOTUS DRIVEN WHEN THE BREAKS ARE BAD as this "All-American Takes A Turn For The Worst" like NOVA'S DRIFTING ON A RACING TRACK!!

^^^^^^^decent way to end it...

You're a champ? but “Toe-To-Toe” he's gonna use those MEAGAR STRIKES FOR STAND-OFFS? when “Those Hands Never Cause Friction” he keeps a “WEAK SUPPLY OF HAND JOBS”

^^^^^^^^woah.. wtf just happened here?first off, thats a no no, using hands twice so close together is too redundant.. next, as a punch it was terribly executed.. your flipping a quoteplay containing hands with HANDS? this is very lazy writing..and homoesque..lmao

Tell Mindless his favorite “Pawn's About To Get Vandalized” before he has to “READ TONIGHT'S REPAIR COSTS!” and he can HOPE FOR THE BEST while I put the “SCOPES ON HIS HEAD” like I'm “TREATING RAI FOR HAIR LOSS!!!”

^^^^^^^^^if your gonna end with a gun reference, you need to start wit something that is relavent .... plus the opening was a bit runon as far as sentences go...PUNCH ITSELF WAS WEAK IMO

// He's a multi-rapper, his hands never THROW ABRASIVE HAND SETS but my punchlines'll start “LOADING FRAMES FOR MAN'S DEATH” and they'll have “R Touching Stars” until he's “In A Box” like I'm “CODING GAMES FOR GRAND THEFT!!!” (Rockstar Logo) //

^^^^^^^^^^probably your best bar conceptually, but alot of wording issues here, first line you again redundantly used hand twice, also didnt feel natural when read aloud. would anyone say throw abrasive hand sets to anyone?

Let's be honest he doesn't RAP WITH CRUEL INTENTIONS but my lines will “Make Him Question His Sanity” before he “LAPSES TO DEPRESSION” so when he's hit? I'll leave his “Bell Rung” and “Still Unable To Move” like this is “AFTER-SCHOOL DETENTION!!” //

very long setup and the relavency is a bit thin..runon dialogue, and i wouldve omitted a ton of unnecesary wording that would impede the flow..he 'aint leavin after his bell's rung', like AFTER SCHOOL DENTENTION ,AS A PUNCH IT WAS OKISH, 

You have “No Chance At Defense” if they're really “JUDGING THE BARS MATE!” that “Box I Mentioned Earlier?” he's still “Frozen And Looking Up” like he “SUNK TO A DARK PLACE!” - “Get Out” of your feelings my nigga, he's nervous my lines are RUNNING UP HEART RATES cuz if he's a “Tall Order Behind Bars??” then watch “6ix9ine Get Locked Down” like he's “STUCK IN THE STAR STATE!!” / Fire Nation.

^^^^^^^^^DIDNT QUITE GET THE PUNCH.. TBH... SO hard to say if its a presonal or not.. 

what it came down to is who was a bit stronger more consistently.. and with that rai gets the edge having 1 or two more decent punches, the rockstar logo was prooly your best, rai also had one more thing goin his way, and that was following the scheme truout ..

The Fire Nation