Nice Drop Vol...gL

3VIL don't do word wordplay like dig your own and digiornio when we clearly know those words don't sound a like. Don't force it too much, let it come naturally. The part after that was cold. The Drake Starts punchline was cool. Didn't like the wording, but all in all nice verse. Volcanine the setup rhymes to 3 little pigs were a bit forced but at the same time didn't see the rhyme coming. The in-jury line was a clever set up  no lie. The las part was a bit forced and the ending punchline felt like the metaphor was drawn out to long. Giving it to 3VIL.

hats off to both spitters. I am giivin my voto to 3vil. i just thot he was the 1 who had the better stuff. dig your own duble play wording was clever and helped to demnstrat the higher skill. Volc was great here too do not get me wrong but i think his lines just a bit weaker tha 3 lil pigs line seemed to break the flo up 4 me off the batt so it didn help. thot the las line was ok too but not enough. 3vil a Bit better just on the total

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Pretty cool. GD job.. well let start by saying 3v1l at times your verse made no sense to me.. speaking in 3rd person weakens your flow. U do it in every battle I've read this far. And you do it repetitive throughout the verse.. the digiorno line didn't play well for me. As did alot of your attempts at a solid punch just didn't land. Overall I think u have a cool foundation u just need better wording and open your vocab up a bit. Volcanine I actually enjoyed your verse. It was clean solid packed enough punch to take the battle at ease. The multi game was pretty cool.. wasn't any haymakers but overall a polished verse. Good job both Fair is in