I'll take it if no one is interested.

Fuck, submitted before I pasted the rest of my verse.

Bodied. Good 16 bro.

came down to readability and complexity in punches and structure. rai 9 syuh llable multis schemed is quite impresive. knwldge, clean read, punchez were decent but basic as far as creativity goes. 

Rai wins this with not only better material but also nearly 2x the material.

Rai, I did think your verse was a bit of a tale of 2 halves as I think you came out a little flat and basic, but started to heat up from there right around the Sugarland section and kept the steam rolling from there. Almost all the multis worked just well enough for the flow to be nice and impress readers with the multi-syllabic skill level. Lowlight was first punch or weighing crack exhibits (reachy), highlights were closer and stage collapsed.

KNW, I think you did well here in carrying an entire scheme of your own, but I thought the punches themselves were a bit too much on the basic side. clean hooks/fishing is a SUPER played concept. Planet fitness  was ok but simple right. Clasic finish was probaby your best. Rest of the verse seemed to go off track again and I can actually recal reading another battle you just put out that had a brains all over the floor line so that one I pretty much nullified (even though it was also kind of reaching to begin with). Technical skills wise your rhyming was pretty good, i just think you could do with upping the creativity and complexity in your bars. try to bring something in the previous line that carries over to your next line and is relevant to a single concept. I think this can help bring your text game to the next level.

Ok..Rai had some very solid punches and decent flow... a couple bars had counts off but overall easy to read.

Knowledge: Not quite as smooth multies as Rai but i gave you the edge with more solid punches. Solid battle