Good battle.

One had better punches and flow.

The other can improve on attacking the opponent.

3, I think you displayed better rhyming, subject matter, aggression, flow, and punches. However, I would caution you to be mindful of your punch count. It didn’t cost you here due to the nature of the opposing verse, but your first punch doesn’t really appear until the 5th line. That usually isn’t going to cut it as most cats here spin a set up-punch, set up-punch etc cadence. A 2 or 3 line set up is usually only going to pass if the end punch is an absolute world destroyer. Even then you want some jabs in there still probably. Just something to keep in mind. Jizz, I think you didn’t come with your usual comedy and there wasn’t much here in the way of rhyming or punches. If homo shit is gonna be your shtick, you really gotta fully commit and sell it IMO. 

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