Mcadoo, Coach for the giants

Layne Bryant is a store for plus sized women

Tacomas/To Coma's

my fault, someone told me to change my name. Shouldn't of done it during an open battle. MY NAME WAS RANDOMLOST BEFORE THIS, as far as his first bar goes.

one player had good rhymes to the verse. i thought he played the words good with tacoma = the comas. ben Macadoo good line too. i thouht second player was awite but he tended to be a bit basic with his ideas for lines. smaller set of the rhyming words too. cool battle.

Bnas was a bit better

im was gonna give this to capking/random los s for brining more complex rhyme schemes here, however, i noticed several broken multis for example theres a verse that says "tacomas like toyota trucks" didnt rhyme at all with 'families fucked' besides 'truck' n 'fucked'. 'tooly' n 'families' didnt rhyme at all. actually thosw r just a few examples there many words you capped that werent supposed to be capped. your rhymes have to rhyme exactly sylable for sylable. I feel the 'the MAYYYNE im kinda violent' was a bit forced. and it didnt rhyme exactly with Thats Layne Bryant. so ya i think u should read other mcs on text battles n know that that rhyme word for word n cap their multi sylables appropriately. 

bnas not the best but verse from bnas was more cleaner here than his opponent. several mistakes to note. 'Random' dosent rhyme w/ the word words like 'stomach' or love it, wallet. explain what 'flag' r u refering to? is that the 'piece'? i dont know. u said 'beverly hills' ok hes fron there, but linking it to 'drama shit'? not sure about the connection the two. u shouldve said something associated w/ da city. 'drama shit' is too broad i think. make sure u spell 'surprised' correctly. 'hold my breat' that 'words guy' ? dont see da correletion between the two. 'words guy' was kinda corny. 'thats word, guy' wouldve been a little more understandable but still corny.

no offense to both of u, u guys r good MCs but just dont resune these technical mistakes and you'll be elevating n getting better. fairs in fellas.

Bnas got this one with stronger punches and harder dikz ...i mean multis