TYPO: *DRUG MULE IN A MOVIE" not a Moving ahahahhaa

random got potensh, catch my battles for a lessn in perfection, but got the basis for muntis n punches just structre innit. Still not enuf but speechles dint come his strongest 4sho *gingehairsin*

That verse get's a 3?! How did he attack me at all? What is one quotable from his verse? BANG TOYS LIKE RETARDED KIDS?! fire....

S'all good I guess I have to learn to CAPS better and force multies every line with no punches. I get it.... Multies.. and statements.

EXPLANATION: (since ya'll do this)

Penny/Pen he.. Pennies shine, his raps don't.. Pennies aren't worth much like this faggots raps.

Bang toys like retarded kids, imagine a retard banging toys together.. but in reality they're guns. Nom' sayin'?!

Pocket pussy is a form a fifi for all u felons. Coming out of pocket means he's spending money. Also, CUMING out of pocket(his pocket pussy) is a double entendre. HE ONLY FUCKS PLASTIC FAKE VAGINAS.

Ever played tekken? There is a character named Yoshimitsu that uses swords. He also kicks. So blade at ur throat then the metal kicks(I SHOOT YOU).. that's yoshimitsu.

random is sour as fuck, i may have wasted 2 zutes b4 i judged this and no i didnt progress past hi scohl learnin but im ginger and he oughta step in line if im ever gona be a step dad father figur to this litle bits 

RandomLost is coming in nice for a beginner, formatting fixed and some more creative angles and he'll become a problem. Speechless, bit of a broken flow too much stuff between multis, no wp either. 

It's not letting me vote haha, 6:4.

Good battle for sure. Felt the winner here had the better bars overall, consisntacy in both we're about the same delivery and punches one just shined through a bit more

people just like to fuck off when voting, swear some dont even read and its sad. Good spar, tho.. you had some dope bars.and if you wanna talk quoteables, I actually used one ;) lol jk. Good battle yo

Rookie Mistake Here. Random, U Need to Use More space and get a Lil Deeper with Your Scheming. But u have the Basics Right. Speechless, Your Verse Was Rather Lite BUT embodied the fundamentals. A Few punch attempts and decent set ups.

giving it to speechless for using multis and better punchlines. random gotta cap the rhymes. FI

do I really have to cap my rhymes for ya'll to catch it? jesus christ that is retarded...

RandomLost has some dope potential to be honest. Liked the bang toys / retarded kid bit the most. He's just lacking the structure in how we normally construct our verses here. I think he needs to focus on spending about 2 lines per idea / bar. Try to fit over-all 4 punches in your text box and fill it fully instead of ending the line by pressing enter. That way you maximize how much material you can fit in. My winner got this because he was able to fully utilize the box, I think he was lacking conceptually in areas, where some of the punches were kinda straight forward - gravediggaz / lower than dirt just didn't come off witty enough for it to be a real powerful dig. Overall he showed better structure in his verse though, and better multi usage for the most part. I think RandomLost actually had the better ideas here, but just didn't execute them to their full potential. I am leaning this way though, fairs in fellas.

Just because he lowercased his bars doesn't mean it has any less impact to me. He's just new to the site and has to learn the correct formatting. With that said, this was really a close one but I stand with my descion

^^ finally someone can respect his talent ffs. 

SPEECHLESS had the better punches and multis, RandomLost .... no edge at all fairs is jizzINN

im not impressed with randoms use of the box the punches were light on both sides maybe u guys underetimated each other. #re-match