Some decent stuff here. Rai was simply more creative. Even though I think his was getting close to reaching (cash loan from a Dairy Queen?), CD was not particularly complex or cohesive with his drop and the raisin WP only works 1 way. Had to edge to Rai on technicals and creativity.

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Coffin wasn't as complex and his execution was poor, set ups could have been way better for tha angle and concept you took, Rai had a harder punch and was more creative with a personal flip, and his concept use was good, links between setups and punch were better than Coffin's ... fair's in

Niiice. Coffin had a dope 1 liner. Just Rais was stronger.

I liked the final part of CD's punch alot, the Rai-sin wordplay was cool, it was the setup prior that hindered this bar from reaching its full potential, though. Just straight up calling him a fruit and what not didn't seem to take a creative enough angle for me to rate this bar highly. I liked Rai's bar better because he kinda jabbed with the fast food part, and then hit w/a full swing for the advance on a DQ. It was cool, cause it was true, and a creative flip on the DQ initials, the bar was well set up overall. Fairs in fellas, I am rating this bar outta 10, based off what I thnk of the over-all bar.

7-5, mid to high.

For those that didn't get it I was going for a fruit theme , as in current , grapevine and raisin ...

Got a clear winner here

Close battle here. CD I feel like the idea could've been executed better, better set-up connecting the punch to the start of the bar. Rai that was creative, it all related to each other and connected well but I agree with Hyena about reaching, it was enough to take this though. Fair's in.