Mikayl .... ok what are you calling certain words in your verse they don’t even rhyme if you look to your opponents verse he has capped the words he is showcasing as rhymes ... you’ve got some basic ideas but you’ve got a lot to learn and progress on if you want to start winning bartles on here .... Amos this is better than your last verse I read easier to read I see you’ve adjust your structure which helps the read good Multies used and some decent pun attempts got my winner here ... 

Pretty clear here imo. Miks rhyming was just a bit too basic and the verse more cypherish than battle ready. Loads of broken Multis in the cacs. Winner took this with more coherent attempts at punching , Multis , and some half decent ideas and little word play. 

Can't disagree with the criticism here, I was a bit off. Except when I say the bars out loud it seems like they rhyme well but I guess that's just me. Either way this ain't the last of me. Good job Amos that shit went hard, that Belgian waffles line had me lol'ing.

amos had better n more sylables to his mults. mikayl was not bad but could be harder .

Amos' verse hit harder