I don't like explaining bars but it's important to notice that my last words are referring to his verse literally being above mine on the screen.

And good luck!

nice one but remember to fill the box in - good luck !

Edged it for me with an easier to follow and denser rhyme structure. 

This has to be the most random shit I’ve ever read both of yall flit from one concept to another going from iPhone calling Harry Potter to hyena’s with munchies ... shit was mad weird but picking through all of this I’ve got my winner based on execution of Multies as that’s about the only thing I can take from this I didn’t see any real punchline no real build ups no personals it was a tough decision ... let me hit you wid my 6 rules ...

Rule 1 .... always fill the box 

Rule 2 .... on let’s beef 2 lines = 1 bar for example an 8 line battle is 4 bars 

Rule 3 .... text is not written like an audio battle in text you have more chance to showcase complexity in wording and rhyme scheme etc 

Rule 4 .... pick a rhyme scheme and master it letsbeef is dominated by multi syllable rhyming when it comes to text followed by punchlines 

Rule 5 ... learn how to write metaphors and similes these will help you with punchline 

Rule 6 ... keep it relevant your whole bar should be relevant to the punchline at the end. If your punch is about cocaine then the whole bar should be too so don’t start it off by rhyming about fucking his Mum and then finishing it with a cocaine punchline.