Pat Sajack is the host of wheel of fortune. Migos, 21 Savage, and Childish Gambino all come from the Atlanta area. Robin and Beast boy are members of the teen titans.

This was close

Boogie edged it for me with more density of multis and punches. Close call, great battle each way.

Pablo Winner here bright more complexity and i feel he improved his setups but they still don't relate much, so your punches did land but not hard, try utilising your concepts more creatively by writing better flips ... loser was better here too, didn't wank enough or Jizz much in his lyrics, punches were okay but could've been executed better but props for improving quickly on the ways of The Jizz, put your setups in "" and centralize your punches ... fair's is JizzIN

batman was bit messy w the multis but came harder with punches, boogie was cleaner but wasnt that complex. so im giving this to boogie

FVC Entry Vote:

BatMan Boogie:

I think you brought a really interesting style to this battle. There's not a lot of space between your multis so it really feels like a flurry of rhymes coming at the opponent. However, some of your rhyming felt repetitive such as CHIN UP LISTEN/END YA MISSION/END UP MISSING. See how UP and END both appear twice? When you're only hitting 4 syllable count multis like this here, there isn't really an excuse to be repeating words. I think near the middle of the verse you started to lose a bit of direction and the lines didn't really seem to connect from one to another, but you kept the rhyming up pretty steady. I think your verse felt a bit more cypherish than battle ready as there wasn't really a clear setup-punch structure, and the disses to the opponent were a little vague. Things like: Even w/ a COALITION of PROHIBITIONS you'd get NO ADMISSIONS to a PRO'S COVENTIONS didn't really make me feel like YEAH YOU GOT HIM DUDE. it was kind of just like oh ok it sounded ok. For readability, consistency I give this verse a decent score, but it lacked serious punchlines and never strayed from a multi count above 4 so I had to score it a low 5.

Pablo Esco Bars:

I think you started off pretty good here. Nothing fancy, but the dog with fireworks is a pretty clever spin on the angle. Was executed properly with a relevant set up as well. Next line the flow was really good and the punch, while a little played, connected just decently enough. I think against another punch minded battler this line may have been too weak but it was just good enough here. Next punch was a little bit more flashy, referencing Gambino and Migos and 21. Again, nothing out of this world but just enough relevance in the set up to carry it through to the punch. Closer, I've seen a lot of Teen Titans bars and to be frank they were done a lot better than this. Not that this was BAD, I just think it lacked some sparkle and shine. Overall, I think you could benefit from trying to up the complexity of your punches a bit, as well as sprinkle in some more word play. You brought mostly references and double meanings to this battle, and I think you could display more skill with adding in some WPs. Also, your flow was good and multis were pretty clean but it would be a good idea to try and break through the 4,5 syllable count barrier and drop some 6 or 7 syllable rhymes. These rhymes often don't feel too long and drawn out, but just display some elegant skill in writing. I graded this a mid 6.

So, I think with the style clash here we got to see a bit more of a flurry of rhymes from Boogie, but Pablo had the more battle oriented verse with cleaner punches and more direction. I think his use of references and clever spins was enough to take the W here. Fair's in.

FIRE BATTLE  NO HATE

8-4 boggie in the blue wohoo gb Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Pablo Esco Bars
Posted on: 2018-07-14 14:19:21

Dope ass battle. Boogie took it with consecutive ammunition being fired at his opponent . I mean the read was clear nice and also everything you read was a shot after after shot. Pablo had s dope drop the K from wheel of fortune was a nice shot but overall i felt he was firing back as much ammo as the winner to secure the win. Powerful from both though.