this is an expirimental verse. I tried to use 7 syllables each. it was really hard. the last bar dosent make sense. da multis may be realy complicated n broken. but i wanted to try something new for once.

- Sheeeeeesh!!!! Col' Came Hard And The Verse Was Decent But Saiyy'Saiyy' just was OVER THE TOP with these Bars! Schemes solid, Runs Safe and Punches set Up Nicely. Fairs in!

Saiyyann had stronger Multis with clearer purpose for each within the scheme and some nicer wordplay, still a good battle from both ends.

I see potential but the MULTIs were inconsistent, sometimes they were good relatively, like the ego keyboard lines, some were bad like the filthy rent line up until the end where I had trouble keeping up with the Volcanine. Work on using punches n sylable rhymes throughout your whole verse, will give your lines a little more direction. Saiyann this was a nice verse with constant jabs and punches with JIZZY MULTIs, this time around I noticed a bit more complexity and I liked that you used a personal against your opponent and incorporated it into a nice punch made me seriously JIZZ fairs is JizzInn!