quick open ... APOCALYPSE!!

Both good but one had an cl at edge.

KG filled the box whereas Callaway broke his verse into lines, which meant that KG had more content and basically automatically won because of that. Callaway, check out how other people on this site battle - you're not going to get far on here if you don't adapt. Fair's in.

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Had KG taking this convincingly. Callaway got potential but theres a few basics you gotta get down firstly filling the whole box. Secondly, matching up syllables and then also getting more complex with it. GB.

just lookin thru the new battles. this one looks weird b/cuz one player did not complete the verse. sorry man you rhymed pretty OK but the verse wasnt full. the other player was good, he had good rhymes and punches. lucifer playing chess was a cool double meaning. 

man I gotta say KG colder then ice cubes on some polar bear tits lol great word play brother, strong material. Callaway you obviously a newer member.. keep it up, and learn from battles like these. experience will help develope your skills, fair vote in

One flowed better here and had a smoother verse. Loser made a nice attempt and should definitely keep at it. Fairs in gentleman salute

My choice was all around better.. His multies and structure was better along with his punchlines.. He also filled the box the Letsbeef way..

Cal you gotta fill the box bro. Not filling the box cost you alot points. Vote and read to understand the concept of LB. You got potential bro. Would like to see you elevate into a beast.

MCKG, first bar was okay, but talking about yourself like a child and him being a peadophile just didn't hit that hard. Rhyming and execution / wording of bar was on point though. The second bar kinda fell flat to me, cause i didn't know what midget named Roger was taking a Serum. Easily your final bar was the best one out of all of them, the rhyming and execution was pretty good, slight wording issue in the middle but didn't hurt it all so bad, to be honest I didn't see the lucifer playin chess punch coming, so it hit to me instantly. Try to keep up that type of cleverness in your bars.

Callaway, please see a list of things I have compiled, that I believe alot of inexperienced dudes are having issues w/ below:

1. Multis, are the capped rhymes they must match syllable wise, and rhyme perfectly. Ensure you are not stretching them for the sake of getting your syllable counts up, they cannot be forced. 

2. Structure, try to have 4 punches for an 8 liner, spending 2 lines per bar.

3. Set-ups, quote the witty parts in your bars that have double meanings, and the set-up should be relevant to your final punch.

4. Punches, ensure your punchlines are targetting your opponent, try to flip his name or where he's from, personal attacks usually have a little more sting to them. Fairs in.

5-3, high to low.

Still think Callaway's got some decent stuff here, with some work on angles and formatting in terms of filling the box etc.

Anyway, clear who took it.

APOC !!!