i went really soft on this battle very amateurish but let me explain the zero verse

the oSo those two Osiarent capitalized so it looks like zeros. so hes zero fresh. ok nevermind i messed up on that verse lol

oSo had a much cleaner read but his punches had less sting, try using your concepts better and more creatively in your setups to bring harder punchlines e.g. "red on top of red on top of red" haha this could've been reworded to be a dope punch ... Volcanine's verse was choppy af but he had better connections to tha concepts in his bars, and was a lot more complex, i felt he brought tha punvhes with more sting here but he gotta tighten up that wordin, soend more time on your verses bro, keep tinkerin till it's perfect ... fair's in 

One was way ahead in this , tho not perfect , other needs to take note of how others construct a proper drop 

oSo takes it with strong wordplay as opposed to basic similes. O came with denser schemes too.

lol breath mints !