Last line: You ain't 'RAW' MANE YOU JUST 'LUNCH' N the only thing 'fire coming from Vol's top' is 'VOLCANO ERUPTIONS'!! 

*it shouldn't say "cuz" after "LUNCH N"*

And my Tennessee Volunteers (college football team) lost alot last year

expo:  metal sharp-hook, wild cats=tigerd, jungle=woods (even though a forest would classify as woods) . 

to zaekwon -all i did was drop wack shit so youre calling me Tenesee? lmao

nah ,good stuff bro. the dog in the plaine was fire though.

AC's

That punchline destroyed ya, damn.

Volcanin is improvin a lot, multis were better here and links were also better, i felt his punches could have been set up better here tho, they seemed to fall flat cos tha wordin and execution could have been tightened up ... ZaKw0n had a bit of a choppy read but was quite complex, im givin it to him cos his punches landed harder than his opponent's, although wordin could've been better and tha set ups could have been more creative if he'd utilised his concepts better ... fair's in

Good battle bro. Much respect and good luck

whats that? its Turnbull

And the Vols is a college team in Tennessee and their football team lost alot last year. The "dropping wack shit" just goes along with you losing alot lol

I like that hammer head bar btw

Zaek ya i been loosing alot this month haha, but I just wouldnt type tenesee cuz thats a state and no one knows ur personal sport s team it just couldve added a better word but ya ur verse is dope tho no doubt.

to KG-ya i keep reading up on ur feed back and thanks for continuing to help out.

to my fellow ACs, all love man haha

this was a good battle. better one i have gone on so far. both players had good rhymes and ending lines. i think the first player flow was a little off compared to the second player. second player had cool references and lines on the name of the first player. i think the second player wins b/cuz of the lines on name towards the guy.