Wasted this drop. Damn why no one else catch this drop. 

Winner had better punches, execution, and concept use than his opponent, felt his verse more, wordin was okay and it read smoothly too, set ups could have been better to bring more sting but tha verse was nice ... loser needs to fill tha box, saw some multi work but tha 1st bar was basic, punches didn't land hard because they weren't set up creatively, try using ya concepts and make better flips to add strength to ya punches ... fair's in

broken Multis from FRESH and poory execution he seriously made my dick itch.... H1Z1 keep up the good work and JIZZ on these bitches!

Fire FLAMES from winner loser did his thing for a beginner that was tight but I felt loser should of brought more bars no hate both keep doing your thing 

H1Z1, Da feet/defeat bars are kinda played out my dawg. Tried to avoid them. I liked the structure of your verse, and felt like you packed in enough creative content. Just gotta focus on upping the creativity level, and try to think more outside of the box. Your set-ups are relevant, but almost blatant, na mean? Anyways, this is fairly easy for one.

oSo Fresh, you need to fill the box everytime you battle, also please see below:

1. Multis, are the capped rhymes they must match syllable wise, and rhyme perfectly. Ensure you are not stretching them for the sake of getting your syllable counts up, they cannot be forced. 

2. Structure, try to have 4 punches for an 8 liner, spending 2 lines per bar.

3. Set-ups, quote the witty parts in your bars that have double meanings, and the set-up should be relevant to your final punch.

4. Punches, ensure your punchlines are targetting your opponent, try to flip his name, or where he's from, personal attacks usually have a little more sting to them.

Fairs in yall,

5-3, mid to low.

Thanks seul I'm workin on that shit. Thanks for the knowledge