Hope my wordin's better here :p

Say what?! it's Apoc!!

SOME FUNNY SHIT IN THERE...... APOCALYPTO SHIZZLE!!!!!

Runtz, haven't seen you around too often before, but you got potential for sure. Ensure you are filling the entire box. Try to follow these steps when constructing a verse:

1. Multis, are the capped rhymes they must match syllable wise, and rhyme perfectly. Ensure you are not stretching them for the sake of getting your syllable counts up, they cannot be forced. 

2. Structure, try to have 4 punches for an 8 liner, spending 2 lines per bar.

3. Set-ups, quote the witty parts in your bars that have double meanings, and the set-up should be relevant to your final punch.

4. Punches, ensure your punchlines are targetting your opponent, you tried to flip his name (KG), but it wasn't too creative. Korny Gay made me lol but it wasn't actually hard hitting what-so-ever.

KG, Wording has def. improved man, good job. You had better structure, wording and and concepts. I think set-up wise, their were areas you could of slightly came a bit stronger here, to give your punches a little more sting.  Example: Get Ya Shit Cleaned Up / Loo Roll didn't hit that hard. Other then that you did decent. 

Fairs in yall, good-battle !

Kg won this with better punches,  Runtz has a joke style about him that stick out. Could use that in the future as you get the concept of setting your drops up. Practice makes perfect bro. Keep at it

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Runtz has swag and flow for sure. I think he just needs to add a bit more of a set up-punch style to his verse. Definitely has skill though. KG came with more of a battle crafted verse which comes with experience. Think his wording was better here but not his strongest concepts. Still, enough to win here.

On what hasn't Put it all together yet . Fv in. Vb fair

Going with the more experienced texter here as I think he took this in basically all areas. My loser needs to look at his opponents verse for some tips on how the site works. Votes in.

APOC!!!!